When I started my down draft, it was about Breaking Bad and what is about mostly, it was a review really. I talked about the characters and how the show was great. I was saying how good it was, it is my favorite show ever.
I expanded my writing about Breaking Bad with what methamphetamine actually is, and go into how this could actually affect a real life person. Like, what drives a person to make an illegal drug? In this case money, but why not get a job? I explain in my down right here.
My most helpful feedback was I had to connect this show to real life. Like yes, drugs are real, the cartel is real, but in a Breaking Bad scenario. So I looked closely into the plot, the characters, and for the show being so I amazing, I could make a connection.
I expanded my writing about Breaking Bad with what methamphetamine actually is, and go into how this could actually affect a real life person. Like, what drives a person to make an illegal drug? In this case money, but why not get a job? I explain in my down right here.
My most helpful feedback was I had to connect this show to real life. Like yes, drugs are real, the cartel is real, but in a Breaking Bad scenario. So I looked closely into the plot, the characters, and for the show being so I amazing, I could make a connection.