I wanted to put the little details from her past come up again. I would ask what she ate and when she ate it, Where she would go and what she would see or smell. I want to know the little things that make it the big things.
You want to be friendly with them and actually try get to know them, speak with them outside of class, no one will be open really with a q & a with a boring random stranger. Also don’t force it, try to get along and let them know some things about you.
The revision was really helpful, it helped me realize that some of the lines could’ve meant for anyone, they were vague, so I needed those small details in stories to remind them of their past. So I would know that it was to her, it could’ve meant to anyone, and that wasn’t her at all. So revising a poem to make it specific for but interesting to other people was helpful.
You want to be friendly with them and actually try get to know them, speak with them outside of class, no one will be open really with a q & a with a boring random stranger. Also don’t force it, try to get along and let them know some things about you.
The revision was really helpful, it helped me realize that some of the lines could’ve meant for anyone, they were vague, so I needed those small details in stories to remind them of their past. So I would know that it was to her, it could’ve meant to anyone, and that wasn’t her at all. So revising a poem to make it specific for but interesting to other people was helpful.